Title: Chapter 14
| 19 Sep 2020 4:29 am
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Wonderful, intense storytelling. Thank you very much. Enjoyment. I keep returning to this story. And, there are two, two, new chapters on Archiveofourown under the same name and title. Crossreferencing does pay off in these cases of lovely, unfinished tales. Please, dear kind authors: Write fewer, and complete many more, Please?
I just wanted to let you know that you're fanfiction is amazing and I will wait for the next chapter like a man lust for water in the desert because this is the masterpiece of Sevitus. It's totally IC. It's not rushed. It's just very well paced and I can think of many good chapters and things to come. Thank you for this fantastic story!
Thank you for sharing, we pay you nothing and aside from your own feelings as to duty, if you were never to post another chapter it would not be remiss. I hope it otherwise.
Bro! This is adorable! Poor Harry! It really makes you feel sorry for them all! You're writing is amazing!
Awww, nice chapter, isn't Harry so pure? I feel sad for him. In a world of lies and deceit, being innocent has become dangerous.....
Are you going to continue this story?
I'm following this on fanfiction.net, but I've come to prefer this site, seeing that some authors like other, not so well-known websites for publishing, and their stories turned out to be some of the best out there. I've read this in a day, and I enjoyed it very much. I like the fact you stuck to canon Dursleys, since some writers tend to, in my opinion, overdo the (manners) of the abuse. It comes in many forms and is something that is too often overlooked. Now, onto something more cheerful...I pride myself on my knowledge of the English language, but this fic showed me once again the richness and seeming inexhaustiveness of the English synonyms and phrases. So, /you/ should pride yourself on enriching the vocabulary of one foreign speaker.
Title: Chapter 13
| 27 Sep 2017 3:58 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter
Title: Chapter 12
| 27 Sep 2017 3:33 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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No hope there I think! Lovely chapter thank you
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