| Title: Chapter 11
| 27 Sep 2017 3:11 pm
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Lovely! I had a lump in my throat reading this, wonderful writing thank you
| Title: Chapter 10
| 27 Sep 2017 2:52 pm
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Yay he is coming around! Love the chapter thank you
Awww, it has been almost a week since you last updated. A single chapter would suffice, please?
| Title: Chapter 9
| 27 Sep 2017 1:33 pm
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Oh dear I don't think the plan will go well! Thank you a lovely fuzzy chapter
| Title: Chapter 8
| 27 Sep 2017 12:54 pm
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Loved the last comment! Very good chapter thank you
| Title: Chapter 7
| 27 Sep 2017 12:27 pm
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Wonderful chapter! I loved their fight very realistic thank you
I knew that you would break some time. I didn't know what possessed you to update TWO chapters EVERY single damn day, if I had been in your place I would have been teasing my readers for all its worth so they review to read the next chapter. But well that seems to have broken today, you didn't update even a single chapter.
Author's Response: I actually published everything in one go! I think it was just the site admins delaying the publication of chapters. If it's finished, I tend to publish it (I try not to tease or beg for reviews!). This has already been cross-posted to AO3 and Fanfiction, just fyi. And the next chapter is in the works, so hopefully it will be out soon! Thanks for reading :)
| Title: Chapter 5
| 19 Sep 2017 9:27 pm
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Trouble ahead I think thank you a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 4
| 19 Sep 2017 8:47 pm
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Thank you a very lovely chapter I especially liked Florean
| Title: Chapter 3
| 19 Sep 2017 4:09 pm
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Lovely ending to a very amusing chapter thank you
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