Title: To Become a Family
| 17 Sep 2022 11:18 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter thank you so much, I loved the way the dark mark was vanished, very descriptive.
Thanks for the fascinating chapter! Dougal is a great character and the shadow magic is intriguing. I wonder if it will be harnessed for the fight against Voldemort. I’m wishing happier days ahead for everyone at Prince Manor!
Although this chapter would have made a great ending to your fun and captivating story, I’m so glad that you’ve continued on!
That was a wonderful chapter - action-packed and moving at the end there. Thanks so much.
When will young Harry learn not to be so impetuous! I’m so looking to their upcoming meeting with a certain magical being!
Title: The Sphinx's Gift
| 15 Sep 2022 6:11 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a wonderful chapter
Oh that’s heartbreaking. I hope that Severus changes his mind. Lovely imagery of Remus running with the wolf pack!
That was an action-packed chapter! I’m so glad that the immediate threat is gone and they have time to figure out how to prevent Harry (and Moony) from being permanently stuck.
Oh Harry. Why can’t he ever just do as he’s told. The shadow world is a fascinating addition to your story!
Thrilling chapter! I’m so intrigued as to how Ruse will meet his end - hopefully, immediately.
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