Oh the boys bonded. And Sev admitted to another person that he has a goal! So cute!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
| Title: Who You Are
| 17 Apr 2019 8:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved this chapter with such good insight into centaur culture and thoughts. Mooney provided a good counterpoint of a happy creature at peace with himself. Thank you so much for a great chapter and story
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging words. I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
I’m glad Ajax claimed Harry as his foal. I’d love to see how the conversation Firenze affects Sev. So what does Ajax’s sudden fascination with Mars mean?
Author's Response: I used Mars as a way to signify a change coming for Severus, whether physically or emotionally/mentally remains to be seen. (: Thanks for the lovely review!
| Title: Our Pack Herd
| 30 Mar 2019 8:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved this it is so fluffy and warm however I think it will get worse as the angst will now roll in. Thank you for updating
Author's Response: I think you might be on to something. Thanks for your kind review! Enjoy the next chapter.
Lol. It is a relatively cute pack herd. Will the other two assume Sev is going to steal the stone or will we, hopefully, not have to deal with that erroneous belief?
Hopefully Ajax gets to spend some more quality time with his foal alone.
Author's Response: I hope he will, too. ;) And I think they have a very cute pack herd. Thanks for your review.
| Title: The Hunting Compass
| 07 Mar 2019 10:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very good movement of plot.
Sev is going to need to talk to his little foal....
Great chapter!
| Title: A Bad Ruse
| 15 Feb 2019 8:20 pm
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Thank you an interesting chapter
| Title: A Bad Ruse
| 10 Feb 2019 9:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting chapter
I have seen your fic in research many times but I never read it because I did not like Severus as a centaur ... in the end I started to read all the stories with chapters published recently, so also your fic and... I like it! I really like it even though I think Severus is a bit ooc, because Ajax is very kind and sweet with Harry (so cute!)
The presence of Remus (and Moony) amazed me and I really enjoyed it, as well as this last chapter with the final cliffhanger. Now I can not wait to read the following!
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