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Reviews For My Little Runaway
Severus EXPLAIN Author's Response: Severus will try. Thanks for commenting and enjoy the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Enjoy the next chapter!
Into more specifics of this chapter... It took me by surprise when Severus had such an adverse reaction to the zoo tickets. But when I thought about it for a moment, it made sense. I really liked who you can stay true to the character you built for Severus and still take the reader by surprise. I also caught how the kid in the park area didn’t take notice of Harry’s “girly” shirt. *wink wink* (It just emphasizes the thoughtlessness of the adults when Nana bought the shirt. I like the contrast.) I hope we see that kid in the future. o.0 Lastly................. DUMBLEDORE CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! SEVERUS WORKED SO HARD! What’s going to happen!? Is all that we hoped and dreamed for lost!!! If I could give you kudos I would flood your inbox with them. Be well!
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