Aw, so sweet. Don't make him go baaaaccck D:
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I can't say anything about the next chapter, but I hope you'll enjoy it.
Severus seems really laid back in this work, it's kinda funny. He doesn't bother correcting people when Harry is mistaken for his son. He has no shame in using all the hotel towels for transfiguration. It makes me smile to see Severus acting so, well, young. (He IS 27, technically...) Thanks for the fluffy chapter. I'm patiently waiting for the next!
Author's Response: I figured Severus’s reaction would be a bit more relaxed than anything else. First of all, he certainly doesn’t want to alert the authorities! Haha. And he is young as well. I’m glad you liked this chapter! I promise to update when I can.
Title: Time at the Hotel
| 28 Oct 2017 9:43 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter although we don't get weather like describe in this country!
Author's Response: The weather was tricky, I needed something that was easy to run away in without being killed or injured in any severe way. It was this or some severe storm and flooding. That would have been a bit trickier if I wanted a realistic reaction and turn of events. But so glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for your review!
Lol. Harry isn't going to let him go...
Author's Response: He most definitely isn’t! Thanks for your review!
I really want to read more of this. Thanks for a great start!
Author's Response: I’m so glad you want to read more! I’ll try to get the next chapter up soon. Thanks for your review!
Please write more! I want to know what happened next!
Author's Response: I will write more soon! Thanks for your review!
Title: Change of Plans
| 26 Oct 2017 11:55 pm
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Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Love the chapter, Severus wasn't out of character. Love you didn't make him too harsh, I think he would have been portrayrd like this in the original series if he wasn't a spy for the light, nor a death eater. Looking forward to reading the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I’m glad Severus wasn’t OOC and realistic. I tried my best to keep him in character and respond to this situation as Snapelike as I could keep him. I will try to post again soon.
Ooo, can't wait for the next one! Update soon please! (~.^)
Author's Response: Thank you! I shall try.
Great start! I am really looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I can't wait to read more of what happens nect. I can't decide whether Dumbledore is good or bad yet.... and why Harry is so mute
Author's Response: Mysteries that shall be revealed as the story continues . . . Haha, thanks for your review!
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