| Title: Chapter 1
| 29 Nov 2017 9:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the atmosphere, from the ghostly choir to the greenish light from the pumpkins! Best of all is the continuing evolution of the abrasive relationship between Harry and Severus, taking on a new facet since their student/teacher days, and slowly beginning to polish off some of the rougher edges. Very nice take on the prompt! Thanks!
Really enjoyed this. The naturalism was lovely, and the cynicism of Snape's characterisation undercut with the relief of a war completed was neatly captured. Thanks so much!
Author's Response: This is so kind of you, thanks so much for your comment! I really do see Severus as quite an internal man, even at his best, so I'm glad his cynicism came across well!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Oct 2017 4:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great story and I especially like their conversation it is so natural, thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks ever so much! :)
I love the imagery in this story. Somehow this feels nostalgic. You do a great job of keeping Snape and Harry in character while having them both share a bond. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I used to be really nervous about writing Severus, but the more I write from his perspective the more I feel I "get" it, you know? <3 Thanks so much for the comment!
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