So good to see an update.
This is seriously good. I’m looking forward to more.
I can't wait for you to update
So bloomin’ good.
Looking forward to more.
Wonder if this will help Severus see through the cracks in Harry's façade. Probably not--Snape is too stubborn, and (to be fair) Harry has done too good a job of building up his persona. It'll be interesting to see where this goes next!
| Title: Chapter 5: Ragged Edge
| 28 Apr 2019 8:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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I've really been enjoying this story so far. You've done a great job with the characterization of Snape, in particular, which is never easy, and you've managed to take a story-line that has been used many times before and make it unique and compelling. I've also noticed real improvement in your writing when comparing the first chapter to the last. I hope to see another update soon.
| Title: Chapter 5: Ragged Edge
| 22 Apr 2019 9:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow what an ending and a massive cliffhanger! Thank you an excellent chapter, but what is wrong with Harry? Can’t wait for the next instalment, thank you
Hey,
Love the story set up. And I love the way Harry's hiding his hurt. Can't wait for Snape to start seeing through the cracks though.
Do you have any idea when we can expect another update?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm afraid you'll have to be a bit more patient with Snape. But I hope to have the next chapter out in the next week or so :)
| Title: Chapter 5: Ragged Edge
| 19 Apr 2019 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Woah! harry is skilled at editing his memories, cool. What a cliffhanger though! I hope Snape will go easier on him.
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