I like that there is more to read so fast.
Everyone seems in character. The Potter- Malfoy rivalry is present and full of fire. Very good. Now they have another thing to be jealous of over each other - Professor Snape. Poor Snape, I have a feeling he is in for a rough summer.
I like where the story is going, but Snape did seem to adapt to the situation too fast. How does he know Draco can stay with him? Doesn’t he want to figure things out first, like why Draco is even there?
The dialogue is good. Id like to see more thoughts from the characters though. And more descriptions. Descriptions are the richness of the story. :)
great chapie!! hope to see more, soon! hope your february is going good!
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