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Reviews For Undiscovered
Torture this. I can't wait for the part where Snape finds out the injuries. Author's Response: Hahah, sorry about the cliff hanger, I couldn't help myself.
I love this chapter! And, um....uh, I honestly skipped a few paragraphs after they reach Diagon Alley though, I am not quite interesting in that part, maybe you can offer me a summary? Author's Response: Hahah thanks for your review! As for Diagon Alley no problem, Severus basically put a glamour on Harry and they went to dragon alley to pick up some proper clothes for Harry. Harry ran into Draco and Lucius Malfoy and had to keep his cover, Severus saw and intervened and they went back to the manor. (in terms of plot you didn't miss too much)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! I'm so happy your enjoying and I endeavour to continue.
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