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Reviews For Undiscovered
I don't take to constant cliff-hangers, and that cave--- I needed to see starlight in the story,phew. How will they strongarm the Artful Dodger? How will Severus feel as a uncertain father/ protector? will Harry faint with pain, realistically as a wounded human? Will they hitchhike home, or catch a few Icelandic ponies,- which are very strong for their size. they can easily carry even a 6.1"potions Master,- or will they toddle along as Muggles? Will Sev tease Harry? Alan Rickman had a dry, splendid wit. Oh, how his intelligent, courteous warmth is missed in these intolerant, loud times... Please write more soon..when life allows it. Having read, daily, fanfics for 8 years now, I can admit there too many, about eighty percent, gorgeous, talented, brill! stories that stay as unfinished torsos; that horrible habit makes me so sad. Authors and authoresses, please, I beg you, do write the whole story out first in pencil, then start to post one chapter after another. This reader would dance with joy. Haven't you,authors/ readers, ever been sad that something beautiful was just cut off? Thank you for writing this, and I am looking forward to where it will wander. Have a splendid summer.
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