I hope that whole family gets kissed by Dementors
Title: Unnecessary, But Establishes Power
| 17 Nov 2018 3:10 pm
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Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Thank merlin for Harry's rescue at the end. Well done Severus
Title: Unnecessary, But Establishes Power
| 15 Nov 2018 8:27 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating. A brilliant chapter well done Severus! But why did Dumbledore not notice that the wards were showing Harry "at home"? He is so neglectful of Harry
Title: Unnecessary, But Establishes Power
| 15 Nov 2018 12:47 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Yay! Severus came and saved him! Almost too late. I sincerely hope that all of Harry’s injuries can be healed completely. It would be sad if he ends up with lasting damage because of everything. I really hope that Snape takes it up to get Harry back to 100% health, assuming that Harry survives his current concussion.
Great chapter! I was so happy to see an update!!! The only thing that was glaringly dostracting was some grammar problems. ‘To much’ should be ‘too much.” “There taunts echoed down” should be “their.” Some other minor things. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter!!
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