A nice start to your story
Deberías actualizar, esto es genial, me encanta tu historia. Hacía tiempo que no leía algo tan bueno, no la abandones :(
This is incrediable!! Cannot wait to.read more!! b29;d24;b29;
| Title: Ironically Alive
| 01 Feb 2019 10:44 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the chapter, thank you. I hope you don’t mind me mentioning that it would help the flow of the conversation if you start a new line when a new person starts speaking. Looking forward to the next update already!
I love this kind of fic!
I like when Harry is set up with Sirius and instead he should be with Severus ...
I read the story all at once (I was looking for new stories to read and so I decided to browse among the recently updated and I found it!) And I liked it a lot, even if I'm still not sure what happened with the stone ... does Dumbledore really have it? And if he does, how did the Aurors apparate inside Hogwarts?
I really hate Sirius here. And Harry, a bit. He's so stupid!
If he continues like this, he WILL lose an arm, and it will be his own fault. Well, partly.
Mainly Sirius' fault, of course. When will he start acting like an adult?
It's not the Dursleys I'm referring to. MOLLY is making him help clean #12 when he's obviously injured.
(The Dursleys always work him injured)
happy that hermione went to have chat with severus! like sirius being ooc!
I hope Lucius gives that ring to Narcissa as a present, that'd be hilarious.
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