So They're making Harry work when he is obviously injured. Stupid
BTW did Snape get Harry's wand from the Dursleys or is it still locked in a box?
Author's Response: Yeah Dursley's are not the sharpest tools in the shed.... and I really should have mad it clearer (and I'll go back and edit it) that Snape did get Harry's wand back.
sirius will never trust severus!! glad severus find harry & was able to heal him! harry should tell his friends want be going on, then his hear will be less burden!!
| Title: Is That A Coping Mechanism?
| 13 Jan 2019 8:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good chapter but a little worried that Severus suggested flying with a shoulder injury!
I hope that whole family gets kissed by Dementors
How the hell did Fudge know where Harry was and where was Pomphrey?
And if that mission was OH-so-important, why didn't Dumbles provide a portkey for the return trip?
| Title: Unnecessary, But Establishes Power
| 17 Nov 2018 3:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Thank merlin for Harry's rescue at the end. Well done Severus
| Title: Unnecessary, But Establishes Power
| 15 Nov 2018 8:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating. A brilliant chapter well done Severus! But why did Dumbledore not notice that the wards were showing Harry "at home"? He is so neglectful of Harry
| Title: Unnecessary, But Establishes Power
| 15 Nov 2018 12:47 am
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Yay! Severus came and saved him! Almost too late. I sincerely hope that all of Harry’s injuries can be healed completely. It would be sad if he ends up with lasting damage because of everything. I really hope that Snape takes it up to get Harry back to 100% health, assuming that Harry survives his current concussion.
Great chapter! I was so happy to see an update!!! The only thing that was glaringly dostracting was some grammar problems. ‘To much’ should be ‘too much.” “There taunts echoed down” should be “their.” Some other minor things. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter!!
| Title: Thanks, I Hate it
| 11 Oct 2018 11:33 am
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Damn, and I was just hoping harry would have a happy time for the rest of the summer.
Hope Severus figures it out and rescues him soon.
Over all, great chapter, had me on the edge of my seat when Harry went off with Fudge-did not trust him at all.
Looking forward to reading the next update.
| Title: Thanks, I Hate it
| 08 Oct 2018 11:39 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh no! Poor Harry! What a terrible situation he found himself in, especially still hurt and malnourished from the last escapade he was through. Poor kid. I wish he could call for Dobby or something.
And Snape... I hope he gets his mind in the right place to realize Harry is not in the castle. At the very least, Poppy should notice! She'd want to check up on Harry at least twice a day. Dumbledore would want to debrief Harry too. I really hope Snape realizes what happened and goes to rescue Harry soon. I don't know how much more his body can take. Or his mental health.
With Snape being caught out at the ministry - wow, super unexpected, and worrying. Crazy that Lucius came to rescue him, and brought him to the Dark Lord. I'm so glad it all worked out. That was scary!
I'm really enjoying this story, I love the updates! Thanks so much for writing and sharing! I'm so stressed out now for Harry's sake, I hope he gets rescued soon! Or runs away.
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