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Title: You Talk Too Much 26 Feb 2018 6:49 am
Reviewer: StarLight21 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent dialog! :D
Title: I Don't Think I'm gonna Like it Here 26 Feb 2018 6:17 am
Reviewer: StarLight21 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the library description! I also appreciate the sarcastic dialog/humor between Snape and Harry. :)
Title: The Circle of Idiots 26 Feb 2018 6:06 am
Reviewer: StarLight21 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm excited about where you are going to take this story! I noticed some grammatical errors as I was reading and my OCD nerdy self found them a little distracting. Something quick and helpful that you might consider is running your chapters through a free online proofreader. There are a lot of good ones out there and they sure beat proofreading over and over. One I really like is the free version of Grammarly (I'm not in any way affiliated with Grammarly, just passing out a helpful tip). Overall, great work! :)
Title: You Talk Too Much 25 Feb 2018 4:50 am
Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story, both Harry and Severus are in character. Been meaning to review, but haven't got round to it, until now. Update soon
Title: You Talk Too Much 23 Feb 2018 2:27 am
Reviewer: bootstring (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, "Wally" was a nice touch.
Title: You Talk Too Much 22 Feb 2018 2:58 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, this was such a goooood chapter..... I am starting to like Snape... abit now. I mean.. oh well, I can't explain what I mean, so leave it. But this was an amazing chapter.
    You wrote it well.... Hmm, nice touch of the cursed water to get some truths out of Harry, you have a great... imagination.
    Keep writing!
    Lots of love!
Title: It's Me. I Am the April Fool 02 Feb 2018 6:22 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think they might be safer with the devil than they would be with Severus.
Title: It's Me. I Am the April Fool 31 Jan 2018 11:44 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good ending to the chapter. Thank you for updating
Title: It's Me. I Am the April Fool 29 Jan 2018 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh, thank you so much for updating, I have to admit I read this fic just a few or maybe one day ago,m and to think that you updated it, I was ecstatic! Lovely chapter! Loved it, keep going, a few grammatical errors, I know, I also get a bit too excited over posting a chap, but calm down bro/sis? Whatever, calm down, give the chapters a little late if necessary, but reduce the typos. Otherwise, it was a great chap! Keep up! Be happy, keep writing! Thank you!
Title: It's Me. I Am the April Fool 29 Jan 2018 11:04 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanx for the update! I really liked it once again

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