That was a really good story. Thanks so much.
Dumbledore’s response, though not unexpected, was disappointing. The end with Nott was really sweet in a very subtle and nicely done way. Great chapter. Thank you.
Terrific chapter. I loved Snape’s musings at the end, and the lighthearted banter between the boys.
Wow, this was an angsty and amazingly well written chapter. I held my breath for a large portion of it.
This was good stuff, indeed! Thanks for the great chapter.
That was a mesmerizing take on canon. Thank you.
Another great chapter. I like how Harry speaks his mind and isn’t cowed.
This is wonderfully written. It’s brilliant really. I loved that first Potions class, even as it didn’t run smoothly.
This is a terrific start to your story. I love the well written details and observations that create new depth to a familiar scene.
I don't think I breathed that entire chapter.
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