Wow! The quality of writing is amazing. The description is incredible and really pulled me into the story. I can tell you put a lot of time into this and that you really have a gift. Keep it up! :)
Author's Response: Awww *blushes* I'm speechless *hugs* ^-^
| Title: Chapter 5
| 28 Feb 2018 6:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well done thank you. I certainly got enough Severus/Harry interaction in this chapter! I liked the way Severus fought against the belief for so long definitely a more realistic Severus!
Worth waiting for.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it ^-^
Ooooh it’s been awhile since I’ve found a story with well rounded characters. Great job with Snape’s discovery!! Kept him in character!!
Author's Response: Oh, good! I've been working hard at keeping Snape…well, himself ^-^ So glad you're liking it!
I am really enjoying this story. Your Harry is just a little bit different from any I've seen before. I look forward to all your updates.
Author's Response: I should be getting some out at least weekly :) Thanks for your interest, quickster! <3
Thanks for the quick update!
Author's Response: More coming soon, probably Monday!
| Title: Chapter 4
| 15 Feb 2018 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good take on flying incident thank you. Really looking forward to seeing more of Severus and Harry next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for your continued comments and encouragement, Fmh! You're awesome ^-^
| Title: Chapter 3
| 14 Feb 2018 9:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love your hesitant, unsure Harry he is so sweet, looking forward to more action with Severus, thank you for updating
I'm really enjoying this story so far. You're a very good writer, and you use great descriptive language that really immerses readers into the story. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Hi Abie! *waves* Loved your story "To Trust", so I take this as a high compliment coming from you :) Thanks for commenting! <3
| Title: Chapter 2
| 07 Feb 2018 5:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter I love your Harry he is so lost but determined thank you
Author's Response: Awwww, thanks! My pleasure to be able to share, I've enjoyed other people's writing so much :)
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