That's cute.
The ending's a bit abrupt, but whatevs.
Great story! I like how your writing is clear and to the point. I love how the heads of house worked together, and the idea that Hogwarts is looking out for her newest ward.
Brilliant. I normally dislike drabble or similar format, but condensing things like this works so well here to intensify both plot progression and emotions that it works really well. :)
I always thought that Hogwarts had a mind of her own and when people get trapped in steps or in closets it's her way of joking.
| Title: A closer eye on him
| 21 Jun 2018 8:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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An unusual guardian but very apt! Thank you so much for this story
Aww! Good way to end this piece!
Author's Response: Thanks!
| Title: A closer eye on him
| 19 Jun 2018 12:33 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Ah, typical that Harry misunderstood! This story has been a revelation of quality over quantity. I'm still amazed at how you've given so much information and moved the story along with so few words, and the daily post has been a treat. Glad you're continuing.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was amused by Harry's misunderstanding as well. :)
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