Aww... This looked like fun. Amy plans to ever continue it?
You’ve got me hooked. I really hope you come back to this.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 24 Jun 2020 8:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Ann (Signed)
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Very interesting beginning.
Hello! I do so like your writing. It seems silly to charge any serious requital, of either praise or censure, at so early a point. You seem to take a light hand in your references though, don't be too oppressive in your parallels, I fear an inevitable gloom at the title when I hope for something more akin to triumph.
This is awesome so far! I enjoyed it so much that I created a username (my old one long forgotten) in order to give a review. I really hope that you will continue on with this story. Your character description of Snape actually made me shudder at one point. Fantastic!
Great start to the story! I can’t wait to see what happens next :)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 16 Jun 2018 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lots of angst! Thank you an excellent start to the story
This is great start to an interesting story line.
As usual the Dursleys treat Harry poorly and now Snape believes him to be a juvenile delinquent. I hope Harry doesn’t suffer to much before Snape starts to think things don’t add up. It least Dudley and his gang can’t blame anymore of their crimes on Harry since he will be gone.
Can't wait for the next chapter! I keep getting excited when I see an update, but then sad when it's not actually a new chapter! keep up the good work, its a very interesting start!
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