This is brilliant so far. I really hope you get the chance to come back to it one day.
oh this is lovely, I hope you continue one day
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| 21 Nov 2020 7:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Just re-read this, it is so good, if you can please could you continue the story
This was just getting interesting? Would love to read more.
Author's Response: I'm hoping to get back to it!
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| 21 Feb 2020 9:49 am
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| Reviewer: Damo (Signed)
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Please continue this! I'm incredibly interested in how this could continue
Encantador, un capítulo maravilloso.
Primero, me encanta la longitud, no hay nada tan grato como leer un texto largo y bien montado
Segundo, amo las reacciones de lo personajes, les estás definiendo un carácter maravilloso a través de tus narraciones, una forma única y particular para tu propia y única historia
El detalle horrocrux fue genial y muero por ver la visita a privet drive
Author's Response: Thank you!
I did wonder if my chapters were perhaps a little too long, but I usually break at natural points so length varies and I prefer longer chapters anyway. The Horcrux detail was added in at the last minute because there was something I wanted to deal with at a later point in the story. I hope I remember it by the time I reach that point! As for visiting the Dursleys, I haven't thought that far ahead so they may or may not appear.
| Title: Consequences
| 28 Jun 2018 8:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting thoughts about dark magic and very plausible given Roman suppression of the Druids. Thank you a very well written chapter
Author's Response: Oh! Haha! I'd forgotten about that bit of history. Apparently I'm more clever than I thought. Or, more likely, I'd been marathoning Roman history documentaries at the time I wrote that section. I suppose I'd just always wondered why magic was done in latin and not in Old English or any other native/regional language and so, because legal documents and Church liturgy was done in latin for ages and ages, I just went with it. And the Romans did have quite the influence on a large portion of Europe for a period of time.
This is really a great story!
ETA: I mean your statement that you don't think you can do HP justice. I disagree with that. :)
I totally disagree with your statement. This is some of the best HP fan fiction I have read and I hope you post Chapter 3 soon. I don't think you need to include the text of the letter as long as you kind of go over the gist of it. But of course, you are the author and I would read it either way.
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been hesitant about it for a long time, but a few people here finally convinced me to post so here it is! I'm glad you like it.
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