Yay, Lily! Yay, Severus!!
Harry needs snuggles.
Maybe a stuffie.
I hope the text is included. I think Sev and Harry need to talk without any interruptions from Dumbledore.
Wonderful chapter. Exciting, a few 'aah' moments, and a Harry of an age to ask sensible questions. Lots of things in need of answers so I'm looking forward to the next instalment.
It'd be awesome if you included the text. We can speculate for ourselves, but how much cooler if Lily *knew* this kind of thing would eventually happen? ;-)
Esto es impresionante, he amado cada frase y como has construido el conflicto.
Sencillamente wow!!!
Gracias por un inicio épico en lo que promete ser una historia brillante
Okay, now I NEED more. yep.
Title: Cleared
| 19 Jun 2018 9:59 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very dramatic ending! Thank you a wonderful start to the story
Great story please update soon!
Brilliant! I hope there will be more soon!
Wow this idea is totally new and I like it very much! But I don’t understand how Sirius can disown harry as Potter heir? Because sieius is a black and not a direct Potter. So how can this happen? I hope you can update very soon. I really want to know what Snape will do.
Author's Response: I realized when I started that I had to explain in some way how Sirius has the ability to perform such a detrimental action so I hope the next chapter will explain it enough.
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