| Title: I Must Remember to Stay Calm
| 21 Nov 2022 5:09 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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And just to say that this is the most dark and deranged Rob I’ve ever read. I’m really hoping he gets his comeuppance.
| Title: I Must Remember to Stay Calm
| 21 Nov 2022 5:01 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I hope that you post the rest of your story here on P&S. I’d love to see how Severus approaches his conversation with Harry, and how he ultimately helps Harry.
| Title: New Problems and Unexpected Difficulties
| 21 Nov 2022 4:47 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This was a wonderful chapter. I love that Blaise has allies now to help intercede on Harry’s behalf.
| Title: A new approach to the Potter Problem
| 21 Nov 2022 4:40 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I hope that Snape sees through to Harry’s inner state and the horrors he’s hiding within.
Dumbledore and McGonagall really aren’t trying to understand Harry at all. Hopefully, Snape will attempt to do so.
This was a heartbreaking chapter too. I wonder if Harry will ever learn of Ron’s situation.
Oh no, this just got seriously dark.
This was a great start to your story. I love the secret friendship and look forward to seeing how Harry enacts his plan.
i have already read this story several times on fanfiction and thought it was rich, imaginative, creative and of course daring. i am really looking forward to seeing it on this site and i encourage you to keep it up. subtlety is an art and i believe you are equal to it. if you have ever watched older movies you can see how the best actors were well versed in nuance and were able to let you know what was happening without being graphic when it came for restricted rating material. j.k. rowling did it as well. if you really pay attention to her wording you can see that harry's abuse was very serious physically as well as psychologically. don't give up. you are very talented and i know you can do it. i can't wait to see how the rest of the chapters come out. read you soon!
I love this story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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