It's been forever since I read the original, so I love reading the rewrite!
Confused about his, Mondon's, plan though. Did he hear the Slytherin's talking before the sorting or after? If it was after, why did he want to go into Gryffindor?
Will he live up to being a Gryffindor now that his revenge is taken care of?
How did the professors make sure he wasn't lying? I imagine he'd be a good liar if Snape can't even intimidate him.
Can't wait for the next update!
| Title: I Must Remember to Stay Calm
| 24 Nov 2018 9:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I'm sorry that the Ron/Hermione story line came back I hope it is resolved soon. Apart from that I loved the chapter, very well done thank you
Author's Response: It's still in there, just a bit subdued . . .
| Title: New Problems and Unexpected Difficulties
| 22 Nov 2018 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter. I think you have taken out a lot of Ron/Hermione interaction which I think enhances the story and allows the main point to be towards Severus/Harry situation. I hope you can continue with this story as it is so good, it must be hard to re-write your work so well done for this.
| Title: A new approach to the Potter Problem
| 22 Nov 2018 9:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the way the story has been expanded thank you
| Title: The first Potions class
| 22 Nov 2018 8:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry, thank you an excellent chapter.
| Title: Interlude 2 (Summertime)
| 22 Nov 2018 8:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very dark and emotional but very well done thank you
Hi! I've been enjoying this story and am wondering if you're going to continue posting the edited version?
I can tell this comes from a raw and real place, and I get the feeling that the pay off of father-son relationship, and Harry's healing, will be just as good.
I tried reading the original on ff.net and it was a bit too intense for me personally, but I'd love to find out what happens with Harry and Snape.
Even if you're not planning to update, I'm glad I got to read as much as I did.
I always enjoy your stories - Freaks Aren't Allowed is one of my absolute favorite HP fics, that I go back to read, time and time again. Anyhow, thanks for writing and sharing!
| Title: A new approach to the Potter Problem
| 16 Jul 2018 7:39 pm
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| Reviewer: UniquelyMe (Signed)
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I remember reading this on Fanfiction.net
I thought it was very OoC and disturbing but loved it all the same. Glad to see you're reworking it. Can't wait for the next updaten :)
| Title: A new approach to the Potter Problem
| 27 Jun 2018 7:56 pm
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Poor Harry! Very good chapter thank you
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