This was a brilliant chapter, from the chapter title to the author notes.
Interesting start so far, I look forward to reading more and seeing where this is headed.
Good job balancing the kid with the adult-wanna-be. I'm thoroughly enjoying this story and looking forward to what might be coming ahead.
I can not wait for the next chapter! This update had me laughing, I loved the whole trial and dinner scene, and how Harry's invitation turned out so well.
I loved this chapter! Keep it coming!
This is a really great Independent!Harry fic... the trial is going to be interesting!
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| 19 Aug 2018 11:02 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great idea of Harry's, and you of course, I hope this will make Severus think a little but I fear it will make him even more angry! Very mean of Dumbledore to bring Severus along as he will make Harry to be reckless and immature, I'm thinking of the flying car incident especially. Thank you for a great chapter.
Brilliant. I wish we could see it from Snape's POV.
Just one small correction, I hope you don't mind. You've spelled quiet as quite (when harry has just entered the courtroom)
Author's Response: Fixed the spelling error. Thanks.
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