| Title: No Darkness Too Deep
| 13 Aug 2021 12:31 am
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| Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
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Gosh, but that was dramatic! I loved this newest Alley interlude! How will Harry fight this? Is there a way to take the ministry to court, either for violating laws on British or international standards? Surely there is some kind of right to work standard, or a law requiring them to prove those citations aren’t just made up?
I can’t wait to see what you have in mind to handle this!
This was such an amazing read, and the ending was perfect. Thank you for sharing!!!
Wowie. This is really beautiful. I'm going to miss this story so much. It's been an amazing ride.
PS, very open to a sequel if the inspiration strikes ;)
Author's Response: Already planning one! If you wanna help it move along faster, find me in the group Discord and PM me to let me know things you'd like to see in a sequel.
| Title: Those Who Choose You
| 11 Aug 2021 3:35 am
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| Reviewer: Bones (Signed)
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That was awesome! Thank you so much for your effort and for indulging us with this wonderful work of yours. The scope of the magical world which you covered, from the Alleys, the different characters and lives of the Faes, how magic works differently (eg vampire's apparation) to the emotional aspects of what everyone is going through, is breathtaking. I enjoyed and chuckled at the interactions between Bellamy and Snape, though few and far between, and I also liked the subtle hint given by Minerva that Snape ran away himself as a teenager. Although we didn't get a closure regarding the horrible actions from the Ministry, it was nice to see the support from the people from the Alleys standing with Harry. I didn't expect that. Now, I will go back and reread and enjoy this story again slowly. :)
Another interesting chapter. Hope these two can put together their cunning and courage and come up with some good countermeasures.
Oh the Ministry. How wretched they are. I hope Harry can maneuver out of this and follow his convictions of righting these wrongs. Thanks for this great chapter. There were so many touching moments.
I picked up the story when you started updating now and I really enjoy the premise! I like seeing Harry take on his business empire and the alleys. (I also look forward to see him royally mess up... Can't all be roses and wine.)
| Title: No Darkness Too Deep
| 09 Aug 2021 12:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
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Gosh, but that was dramatic! I loved this newest Alley interlude! How will Harry fight this? Is there a way to take the ministry to court, either for violating laws on British or international standards? Surely there is some kind of right to work standard, or a law requiring them to prove those citations aren’t just made up?
I can’t wait to see what you have in mind to handle this!
ohhhh I'm feeling stressed for Harry ahaha the ministry is the worst! I really loved this chapter!
You updated!!!
I always thought this was abandoned at a bad spot. One chapter earlier would have felt more complete.
Harry really has to learn not to spend so impulsively. I know he has a lot. But that is a common problem with people who gain money fast. They spend it and then it is gone. But old money is for future generations as well.
I hope we will see Snape teaching him. But I don't know if he is much better at that than Harry.
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