Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 2: The Repercussions 17 Feb 2024 12:26 am
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]

    I like how your Snape stays in character so much though he slowly changes his perception of Harry. I like how he justifies it with the task Dumbledore gave him but I'm looking forward to Severus maybe really changing not just under pretence. Also your writing is fantastic! They are some sentences that just have such an impact and are full of meaning. Also, I liked the idea that Snape having to get to know Harry is a kind of last resort and not just for Dumbledore's amusement.

Title: Chapter 1: The Accusation 16 Feb 2024 11:02 pm
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]

    Hey, I've come back to read this a few times over the years because it's so so good and well written! I liked the pace of this chapter a lot. At first you see the teacher's reaction which heightens the anticipation of what had happened. I really like your Harry too and that he is friends with Luna. It's really something different and original from other fics. Lastly I really like how you kept everything in Severus' POV. Thank you!

Title: Chapter 5: The Undeserving 06 Feb 2024 1:40 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I just had to come back to this wonderful story again. I’m still ever hopeful of an update.
Title: Chapter 5: The Undeserving 09 Aug 2023 2:35 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    This is wonderful. Totally wonderful.
    I sincerely hope you get the chance to come back to it.
Title: Chapter 5: The Undeserving 09 Jul 2022 2:09 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so compelling and wonderfully written. It reads like a dream. I truly hope you are inspired to write more, and deep thanks for what you have already written.
Title: Chapter 4: The Deserving 09 Jul 2022 1:54 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is incredibly enjoyable to read. It flows gently, while churning powerfully. I’m intrigued by Snape’s discovery, and am looking forward to seeing how it impacts events ahead.
Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths 09 Jul 2022 1:28 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so beautifully written, and the chapters are wonderfully long and rich.
Title: Chapter 2: The Repercussions 09 Jul 2022 1:20 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so well written, and so different from anything else I’ve read. I hope that what Severus starts with duplicitous intentions becomes real. Thanks for the excellent story.
Title: Chapter 1: The Accusation 09 Jul 2022 1:01 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was such a powerful and compelling start to your story. I was completely drawn into the world you’ve created. Thanks for this.
Title: Chapter 5: The Undeserving 27 Jan 2022 8:28 am
Reviewer: Aimer (Signed) [Report This]
    I periodically come back to this story. I wish you are well

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