This is a very interesting start! I hope you come back to it someday.
| Title: The Boathouse
| 26 Sep 2020 7:35 pm
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| Reviewer: dex (Signed)
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I hope you continue this!!!
Any chance you'll get back to this? I enjoyed it, and think it has a lot of potential.
Wonderful start! :D Your writing flows wonderfully and smooth, it's a joy to read. Interest take on the time travel - especially with Snape reliving some of Harry's memories, before it actually happens. I do hope this won't cause a 180° turn in how he sees Harry - so many years of hatred don't disappear just like that - but it definitely explains why Snape would want to get a second chance for everything!
Especially Lily being there, making him promise to do better this time - it's ought to be enough for him to make an effort, even if it's going to be difficult.
I'm looking forward to see what's going to happen, next, and what Snape is going to be doing!
Wonderful start, thank you so much for writing! :D
~Gwen
would love to read more!! I really want to know how this continues!
I love the idea and can't wait to see where you take this story
I'd really love more on this. It's a nice twist on a few of my favorite tropes. Even if you don't continue, thank you for sharing what you have.
looking forward to seeing more...
I like your first chapter a lot and would love to read more. Severus going back to do it again is always a fun read. Having Lily's threat over his head should just give him extra incentive this time. More, please?
I'm definitely interested! This is a really cool twist on the time travel plot, I'd love to see where you go with it!
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