Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 5 05 Dec 2023 2:49 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Here I am again.
    Still loving this.

    Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Title: Chapter 5 04 Dec 2022 5:58 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a heartfelt and satisfying ending to your wonderful story! Thanks so much for another great read through. It feels like a bowl of warm soup on a cold day.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for your wonderful responses to this fic :) it means the world to me to know that it means something to others! I'm so touched by your comments, thank you, thank you, thank you!
Title: Chapter 4 04 Dec 2022 5:44 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    There are many things to appreciate in this story. It feels profoundly important that Snape gave a name to Harry’s challenge with eating. His fierce protection of Harry and his keen observations of Harry’s reactions to his actions are so astute.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I really love writing Snape being extra watchful of Harry and maybe seeing what others miss as well as just being very protective, I'm glad that came across here without being too ooc.
Title: Chapter 3 04 Dec 2022 5:15 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how patient, calm, and supportive Snape is being with Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks! That is also something I love when it happens in severitus fics! if only canon Snape could have been that for Harry I think so much could have been better for Harry :)
Title: Chapter 2 04 Dec 2022 5:04 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This conversation played out so naturally and with such restrained emotion that it felt real. Thanks for this wonderfully engaging chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I put a lot of thought into dialogue and I'm glad it seemed in character :) sorry about the multiposted response in your last wonderful comment haha my phone is being difficult today.
Title: Chapter 1 04 Dec 2022 4:51 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m back for another read of your wonderful story. I love that Snape observes and asks. And I’m especially glad that you continued your story beyond this first chapter!

    Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! I'm also very happy I didn't end the fic here :)

    Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! I'm also very happy I didn't end the fic here :)

    Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! I'm also very happy I didn't end the fic here :)
Title: Chapter 5 04 Sep 2022 1:18 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    So good to read this again.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 5 20 Feb 2021 7:39 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    What a sweet story! And so well written!

    Author's Response: thank you so much! :)
Title: Chapter 5 02 Feb 2021 12:17 am
Reviewer: esoteric (Signed) [Report This]
    This was wonderful. I loved it! I typically shy away from fics that center around eating disorders and self harm since a lot of the time it's portrayed in a very juvenile and romanticized way, but you did a fantastic job.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I usually am hesitant myself to read fics that might not appropriately address trauma, so I understand what you mean! I'm glad that you felt like this fic handled the subject matter well, I was worried about that because it was short but it's good to know it still worked. Thanks so much for commenting :)
Title: Chapter 5 02 Jan 2020 1:00 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliantly done.
    Loved the ending.

    Author's Response: thanks so much! :)

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