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Reviews For Felix Felicis
Title: Felix Felicis 06 Jan 2019 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww, I loved it! Especially the “Always.” Well done!

    Author's Response: Oh my god thank you so so much! I am over the moon that you liked it! It's only my first story, I will definitely continue writing :)
Title: Felix Felicis 04 Jan 2019 10:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well done for your story, interesting idea I hope you continue writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I definitely will continue writing and uploading! :) Glad you liked it!
Title: Felix Felicis 04 Jan 2019 3:56 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Felix Felicis 02 Jan 2019 9:41 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Pretty good for your first story - you described Harry's thoughts and blind running nicely. Not too many mistakes with the English either.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am so happy and surprised that people seem to like my story or at least don't find it absolutely horrible ;)
Title: Felix Felicis 02 Jan 2019 4:50 pm
Reviewer: BlueMoon007 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is difficult to read, you need some more paragraph breaks.
    Usually everytime there is a new speaker it should start its own paragraph.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for you review! :)

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