Awwww, I love it! Fantastic ending. And great solution to keeping Harry protected. I love that Sirius is able to hep keep an eye on Harry. So Sweet. thanks for writing and sharing this story!
still like reading this fic!! nice chapie!!
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Yay Snape! I’m really pleased and unexpectedly proud that he is putting aside his hatred for Black in order to keep Harry safe. The names of the plan, “A” for Albus, “B” for Black was really clever. It was amusing that he even thought about sending Harry off to live with the Chudley Canons as plan “C.” Cute. I’m really enjoying this story, and Snape’s growth of maturity. Well done!
Author's Response: It is time he matures a bit, isn't it? But he will still be a bit nasty to Black when the opportunity presents itself in the next chapter... nothing happens overnight, after all. Thank you!
Cool chapter! I’m loving Harry’s growth and exploration of things, like how to write a letter to a loved one, or at least someone who cares. It’s great that Snape is taking it easy on Neville. Also really interesting to realize that Neville should know a lot about the properties of plant potions ingredients. I never realized that before. I’m really enjoying your story. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: It is rather puzzling that Neville is so bad at potions (probably it is because he gets nervous), as the plant ingredients shouldn't be a problem to him. Thanks for your comment!
| Title: Chapter 16
| 07 Aug 2019 4:24 pm
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Loved the conversation between them and how Severus ran rings around Sirius thank you
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great chapter! keep the updates coming please :)
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| Title: Chapter 15
| 21 Jul 2019 7:16 pm
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I love the undertones of this story, very clever thank you
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happy that neville was able to answered a question & sad that he didn't earn points!! like that hermione point to harry that sirus seem more concern about severus, than every things else.
Author's Response: Neville deserved that. And I think Severus is able to recognize competence when he sees it, even in a Gryffindor. Yes, I think Hermione would quickly notice that Sirius shares James' irrational hatred of Severus.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 10 Jul 2019 8:18 pm
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Very amusing thank you
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Hahahaha!!! I LOVE it! Poor Harry. He must feel like his life is over. Hermione is too smart for her own good. I love your characterizations of the kids. Very well done.
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Hermione is good at finding out things no one wanted to know ... or wanted her to find out, respectively.
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