Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 26 Apr 2020 1:37 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a big change for Harry. Still he lived in the dorm at Hogwarts so he is somewhat used to being in close quarters with others.
Title: Chapter 1 26 Apr 2020 1:30 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus is nothing if not dutiful. He may not like Harry but will still protect him. The idea of Dobby actually causing Harry harm in spite of the wards hadn't occurred to me. It's an interesting twist.
Title: Chapter 10 24 Apr 2020 3:57 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter!
Title: Chapter 10 22 Apr 2020 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting. I think your take on corporal punishment is a bit over the top. If everyone who was spanked went on to hurt their friends, that would be almost everyone in my generation. Certainly I’m not defending it especially with caning which is abuse. OTOH I like how Snape is making Harry think These things.

    Author's Response: Severus is talking about his own life here. And I do think his home life might have something to do with the fact he called Lily a racist name. Please do not take everything Severus says as my own opinion - characters I like tend to not say things I consider absolutely horrible in my stories, but their opinions can differ from mine quite a lot. (I don't consider Arthur Weasley a bad person for canonically physically punishing Fred and George after they tried to get Ron to make an unbreakable vow. It obviously didn't help, but I can forgive him for feeling that he needed to punish them severely and defaulting to the punishment he was used to.)
Title: Chapter 10 22 Apr 2020 5:14 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great conversation between Harry and Severus.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 6 19 Apr 2020 4:19 pm
Reviewer: Violet flower (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Snape thinks to make a sort of shortcut to the chase. I feel for Ginny's poor pet...

    Author's Response: Yes, poor puffskein ... I based this on the things written in handwriting in the first edition of "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them", where someone asked what happened to the puffskein and it is revealed Fred and George used it to play Quidditch. Thanks for commenting!
Title: Chapter 9 17 Aug 2019 5:18 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving it! So Harry has returned, reluctantly. Smart of Snape to have preplanned the next time Harry runs away. XD Awesome. Great development. I'm really loving this story and its development. Thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am sorry I was so late in posting the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 9 16 Aug 2019 9:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the way Severus explained to Dumbledore how he found Harry and his way of giving Harry a loophole to run away again. Thank you for your wonderful story

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 8 16 Aug 2019 4:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely chapter. I’m so glad Severus knows that Harry didn’t deliberately hurt a living thing. Perhaps they can start again.
Title: Chapter 9 14 Aug 2019 12:50 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Let’s see how long he remains at the Weasleys’.

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