Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 16 Aug 2019 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I was not sure about the themes of this story but I think it might be good fun so thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you! I totally get why you weren't sure, but I hope you'll still like it. I don't tend to go much into detail with horrible things.
Title: Chapter 1 12 Aug 2019 7:23 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. Great start!! Poor Harry. I bet Hermione is just tricking him. I’m loving the set up to get Snape’s help.

    Author's Response: Yes! Hermione realized he's not himself and doesn't want to trigger any aggression while she takes him to get help. And the love potion makes Harry very willing to believe that other people are in love. (It was never outright stated what love potions do, but seeing how Ron didn't think it the slightest bit strange to be in love with a girl he'd never met, and was happy to drink something Slughorn gave him to "make him braver" or whatever excuse they gave, I figured love potions make people very open to manipulation in general)
Title: Chapter 1 08 Aug 2019 2:43 am
Reviewer: bootstring (Signed) [Report This]
    Good on Hermione, that was fast thinking.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried it might not be obvious enough that Hermione is just trying to get Harry to get help, glad it works! :)

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