I wonder what Snape did to make Luna better? Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Well, when you are a legilimens, you don't have to rely on shouting at the dying person to not go into the light ...
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Woah! Ginny killed the Basilisk, cool! But Luna! Oh, poor Luna. I hope she makes a full recovery. Maybe Harry can actually make people apologize? Great chapter. I loved the mysterious bits about Snape. I wonder what he did. Great characterizations! I love the sweeping, imposing, in character Snape you write. Love that he told the Headmaster to shut up. XD
Author's Response: Harry will probably start being friendly with Luna a bit earlier in this timeline than he did in the original.
I'm glad you like "my" Snape. It is hard to balance his in-character behaviour with him being a bit nicer to Harry than in the original without it seeming random. Hope you will like the later parts.
It is totally my headcanon that he is rather rude to Dumbledore in private. And that Dumbledore doesn't mind. It's probably based on that scene where Dumbledore asks Snape to kill him, and Snape is angry while Dumbledore cracks jokes. It just seems fitting that Dumbledore chooses to let him rant all he wants because he knows Snape will do what he asks him to do in the end, anyway.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 22 Sep 2019 5:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love severus’s sarcasm it really fits in with your characterisation of him thank you
Author's Response: Thank you! I always try to do him justice.
Harry seems a bit pointless in this story he's kind of just an observer. I prefer Harry centric stories but otherwise good story and looking forward to see what happens next😄
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