Nice reaction from Snape when he learned about Harry's situation with the Dursleys. I wonder what he will come up with to help Harry? And who were Rose's parents?
Woah! What a bombshell! But I am glad that Harry's secret is now told. I loved all your characterizations in here, but I am rather mad at Dumbledore.
I really hope that Snape can come up with a better way to help Harry than just telling Dumbledore.
The part with the train and Snape getting Luna to go back was really cool. So nonchalant super power dream walker!Snape. I love how you add that coolness to his character. I'd love to see more of it.
Thanks for the updates! And for writing and continuing to post here!
Poor Luna. No one even sent her any get well cards. I hope Harry and his friends remedy that. The end was a surprise - I thought Snape was Rose's father, too.
Author's Response: In this Story, Harry and his friends will befriend Luna a bit earlier. :)
Wait... what?!? the plot thickens! Wonderful yet again! I like where this story is going. Can’t wait to read more! x
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it!
| Title: Chapter 11
| 10 Oct 2019 8:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh that was a low blow now we can’t assume anything! Thank you a great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad I could surprise you! (Come on, it isn't such a low blow - it isn't the first, or even the most outrageous lie Mr. "loyal death eater" Snape tells ...)
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