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Title: Chapter 13 06 May 2020 12:02 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Rose is fun. I'm looking forward to finding out how she adapts to Hogwarts (or Hogwarts adapts to her). At least she alreade has some friends in Hermione and Ron.

    Author's Response: I am admittedly not sure if I will write about Rose at Hogwarts, since most of the interaction between Harry and Snape will be in the summer holidays ... perhaps I can put it into an epilogue. :) Thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 12 05 May 2020 11:50 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    At least, Harry has already met Rose and likes her. The explanation for Harry's appearance should be interesting.
Title: Chapter 11 04 May 2020 11:55 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice reaction from Snape when he learned about Harry's situation with the Dursleys. I wonder what he will come up with to help Harry? And who were Rose's parents?
Title: Chapter 9 04 May 2020 11:37 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what Snape did to make Luna better? Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Well, when you are a legilimens, you don't have to rely on shouting at the dying person to not go into the light ... Thanks for commenting!
Title: Chapter 13 02 May 2020 2:48 pm
Reviewer: kutley87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 13 30 Apr 2020 8:12 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. I love Rose she has so many of Lily’s qualities, let’s ignore Lockhart!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like Rose, adding one's own characters to fanfic has always been a bit controversial, especially with main characters.
Title: Chapter 13 22 Apr 2020 5:29 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the growing relationship between Rose and the trio. Of course, no one pointed out that the Gryffindors may shun the trio if they hang around with a Slytherin.

    Author's Response: Thank you! And of course no one pointed it out - the trio are clever enough to notice that being shunned might be a problem, but much too Gryffindor to ever care about it happening to them themselves. They'll stand by their friends no matter what. (Rose would point it out if she had been immersed in house politics for longer, but right now, she can't imagine anyone disliking her new friends and half-brother.)
Title: Chapter 12 05 Nov 2019 12:01 am
Reviewer: krystarka (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful fic! I had seen it among the recent stories, some time ago, and I had promised myself to read it but then... um ... I forgot!
    Luckily I saw it after you published 'The Cursed Photograph', because I hated to lose it!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it and that you found it again.
Title: Chapter 12 23 Oct 2019 11:42 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! The plot thickins!

    Lockhart... just gotta shake my head and be glad he's dead. What a mess. Poor Lily. I wonder that Lily was able to keep the pregnancy from James. I guess she used concealment charms? And delivered Rose during the summer?

    Poor Severus... having this baby dangling in front of him, wanting to be her dad at some point.

    Poor Harry feeling unloved and unwanted. Wow.

    This is deep. And complicated. I appreciate you coming up with it, and writing it in such a way as to make sense, and fit in, and be plausible. Well done.

    Great story. Thank you for writing and sharing it, and updating.

    Author's Response: I was thinking that she faked/provoked a fight with James to explain a separation for a couple of months and then made up with him. It is rather difficult to write such a deep story, I am more of a fun and light stuff type of person, but the idea wanted to be written, so ... I can only hope to do it justice. Thank you for commenting!
Title: Chapter 12 22 Oct 2019 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very revealing chapter and lots of hints of what might be the truth

    Author's Response: Thanks! Hmmm ... hints? I thought things were pretty clear. Should I make some bits and pieces more explicit?

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