| Title: Chapter 2
| 10 Oct 2019 8:32 pm
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Thank you a very dramatic chapter!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 10 Oct 2019 8:32 pm
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Thank you a very dramatic chapter!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 10 Oct 2019 8:23 pm
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I liked it a lot a very good cliffie at the end. Thank you
Woah! Intense! What happened? Was it his mother’s protection? Or Harry’s magic itself? Or something Snape did? I bet Snape was really angry when Harry begged for death. I wonder if his Crucio was worse because maybe it came from his love rather than his hate?
Great story so far, very strong descriptions, good telling of emotions. I enjoy the drama and mystery. I hope Harry is okay! What if it is his magic burning itself out? Eek! Please update when you can!
Woah! Direct beginning, you did a fantastic job in setting the scene and the characters. I really hope Harry won't be too badly tortured. This seems scary, and probably dark. I hope Harry and Snape both make it through such a difficult and horrendous time. I'm scared but want to read more. Thanks for sharing.
Definitely more than interested. What happened? How did Harry get captured? Can’t wait to find out
This is an interesting start. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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