Title: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
| 04 Dec 2022 2:51 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for the sweet story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting! :)
I still love this.
Author's Response: thanks so much!
So good.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
| 16 Nov 2019 3:36 am
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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I really like your story. It definitely pulls me in and gets me emotionally involved. Just a minor tip. Some of your sentences are really long and that detracts from the flow. Overall it is very good so don’t take my suggestion as a put down of the whole story.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks so much for your review and thank you for the tip! I do have a problem with run-on sentences so I'll have to go back in and tidy those up sometime. I'm glad you liked the fic! :)
Title: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
| 02 Oct 2019 7:01 am
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Reviewer: Ophelia (Signed)
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If only! Of course, the books would have been a lot shorter...
Author's Response: so true! it does make me wonder though what the books WOULD have been like if Snape and Harry had been able to get along...hmm...I guess that is why fanfiction exists! :) thanks for your review!
Title: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
| 29 Sep 2019 4:17 am
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Awww, this was heartbreakingly beautiful. I do wish it was longer, of course. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
Author's Response: thank you for your review! I'm sorry it is not very long, but maybe someday I will write a sequel for it. :)
Title: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
| 26 Sep 2019 11:38 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely story thank you x
Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
| 26 Sep 2019 1:18 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awwwwww, I loved it! It was great to read it all from Snape’s point of view. He was very in character. Funny how the trolley witch mistook Harry for Snape’s son. I guess she put the idea into his head. :) Harry seems more with drawn than is canon, but it works for this story. I really like the set up here, and adore your Snape. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Author's Response: thank you so much! I love Snape's pov, even if it can be challenging to write sometimes. I also love the troupe of someone thinking that Harry is Snape's kid and both Harry and Snape being like "NO! but maybe..." I did write a sadder Harry than i think canon is but I hope to expand upon that if I ever decide to write a sequel. thank you so much for your review, it made my day! :)
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