Ugh. Poor Snape. It must have been unpleasant to listen to the comments and cheers about 'him' leaving for vacation. At least he managed to keep his cover during the experience.
Author's Response: yeah he sure did have a rough time
I'm not surprised that Voldemort's thoughts follow no logical pattern. After dividing his soul so many times, it must be a mess in there.
Author's Response: yeah that's pretty much what my thought process was too– that, and the fact that his actions were hardly rational
Severus not wanting to be called Al made me laugh. Nice inside joke. And it sounds like Sev needs to write down his backstory details before he forgets them or gets asked more questions. As a new student he is bound to be questioned by the others, especially about life in the U.S.
Author's Response: glad it made you laugh! and yeah
No wonder Harry is so on edge. Having to see what Voldemort is doing as well as having access to his mind would make anyone feel off.
Author's Response: yeah he's going through a rough time :(
Me alegra un montón que vaya a haber una secuela!! Tu historia me encanta y muero por saber más
Author's Response: ¡No podía dejar esta historia donde se detuvo la primera parte! Muchas gracias por tus amables palabras :D
I wonder how Albus knew what sized clothing to buy for Alfonse? Maybe they came with a sizing charm to cover that. Ginny has some temper. Alfonse wasn't exactly welcoming but biting his head off because Harry left seemed a bit much.
Author's Response: yknow that's a detail I honestly just forgot about, feel free to assume that, since they're from a Nice Store, they're automatically charmed to resize to fit the wearer... and yeah i deliberately wrote ginny (and the rest of them, for that matter) as being dramatic and overreactive at times, because in my experience, that's how they are
With the change in appearance, no one will imagine that the new boy is Snape in disguise. It sounds like Severus may have to get used to his new body though.
With the change in appearance, no one will imagine that the new boy is Snape in disguise. It sounds like Severus may have to get used to his new body though.
Author's Response: yeah! i kinda designed his new appearance with People Not Suspecting in mind, since I didn't want to focus on snape dealing with people getting suspicious with this
Really enjoyed your story,almost late to work so I could finish reading the last chapter. Immediately went to look for the sequel please don't make us wait too long.
Author's Response: ahaha sorry to almost make you late for work! and my estimate for the sequel is currently early-mid february, but before that I have a harry and snape centric oneshot that I plan to write, so if you see that posted, then you'll know the next thing I'm writing is the sequel!
| Title: Chapter 24
| 08 Jan 2020 9:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A brilliant last chapter and so sad at the end. I’m sorry that Harry and Severus are still at odds but if that leads to a sequel I’m all for it!
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful story with us, you are a superb writer
Author's Response: yeah it didn't feel realistic for harry to just forgive a betrayal like that, plus, like you said, it gives me material for a sequel so... and thank you for reviewing so consistently! it means a lot!!
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