This was beautiful and creative. I wish there was more.
So good to read this again.
Brilliantly done. I hope you decide to continue this.
Good job tying one of my favorite songs in with the magical world. Great imagery of the gold in Snape's aura flitting like a snitch. No wonder it would keep his attention.
Wonderful!!! I do hope you decide to take this story further after the fic fest, I’d love to see more of a universe we’re harry can see auras!! Thank you!
Title: And I See Every One
| 05 Oct 2019 1:50 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting story I hope you’re doing can develop this theme
That was an interesting premise. I enjoyed all the colors that everyone had in their auras. I'm glad you provided a color guide at the end since I was wondering what Snape's gold color meant.
I liked this as the start of a longer story. I hope that is what this becomes. It really doesn't feel complete.
Oh, no! It ended! I really want to see more between Snape and Harry, discussing the auras. But it was lovely nonetheless. I really enjoyed it. Thank you. :)
Title: And I See Every One
| 30 Sep 2019 6:55 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Woah, that's cool! I appreciated the color code in the end notes. So what is that gold, is it Lily? Is it magic or destiny itself watching over Snape? I wonder what color Snape's aura would be otherwise. Maybe red? I also wonder how much gold is in Harry.
Of course Snape would think Harry needs to be exorcised. XD But if it's trauma then Harry as had a lot of those and an exorcism won't help much. But maybe they will discover the Horcrux early and find a way to get rid of it?
Is Dumbledore instructing Snape to start Occlumency now? It seemed like it.
I enjoyed this one-shot. I can see how the ending was a little rushed, but I still enjoyed it. Thanks for writing and posting while on your holiday!
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