Good first chapter. I have never read one where Potter is still alive when Snape comes to the house. It's an interesting twist.
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't think I have ever read one with James Potter and Snape interacting after the attack as well. Oh well, I'm glad it turned out like this. Thanks for reading! Chapter two will be up shortly.
Oooooo.... this is going to be interesting!
Author's Response: It IS going to be interesting! Thanks for reading! Chapter two is coming up shortly.
| Title: Chapter 1; The Judging Game
| 29 Nov 2019 6:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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An interesting start. It’s different with James and Severus talking, rather than Lily. I like it even if it’s not festive.
Author's Response: It felt very different with those two talking yes, I agree, it felt even weirder when I was writing it, but in a good way. Thanks for reading! Chapter two will be up shortly.
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