| Title: Chapter 3
| 30 Dec 2019 11:04 pm
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Very good interaction between them, very believable and in character, thank you
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 Dec 2019 10:50 pm
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Loved the scene of the two of them in the library
| Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Dec 2019 10:44 pm
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Excellent start to the story and a plausible reason why he couldn’t go to the Weasley house, thank you
This sounds like it was a fun conversation for Sev to have with Harry. Poor Harry truly believing he is dreaming.
Loved this one. Snape was very human, with a good si*ed Slytherin streak, and Harry didn't have a bad Christmas all things considered. Great! (*sorry - the last letter of the alphabet seems to have stopped working on my keyboard.)
Wow I didn't expect this chapter to be the last but it was very nice. Congratulations.
By Raffaella
Author's Response: Thank you!
It actually wasn't the end, but I had to end the story there to meet the deadline for the Tri-Writing-Tournament. I might publish the rest of it as sequel.
The amount of satisfaction Snape must have gotten from manipulating Dumbledore must have been priceless. I love how he never embarrassed Harry even though easily he could have, we've got a very mature Snape here! Thanks for this story :)
I enjoyed this story very much. I found the whole dream Snape versus regular Snape amusing.
I like the way you wrote the chapter through Harry's eyes. He is so sick that he isn't thinking too clearly so, naturally, the person caring for him must be Dream Snape. Severus is doing a good job of reining in his tongue.
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