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Reviews For Unexpected Gifts
Title: Unexpected Gifts 15 May 2020 11:22 am
Reviewer: itslikeorange (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this, the ending was really cute :)
Title: Unexpected Gifts 12 May 2020 7:50 pm
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a lovely cat and bat story.
    Sorry , couldn't resist... Just read FangsFawn's classic 'In Care Of'
    on ffnet. Superb. Wept happily.

    Please take up this cat- theme again some time, if you'd like to. I would gladly read it - adore animal-SS or HP.
    Ps. Val´ance = courage, bravery.
    Valance = bed curtain or fabric
    over a window to
    screen the curtain fittings.
    (North American dialect)
    Best wishes to you and yours for a
    delightful spring;
    and please stay safe in these terrible
    Thank you so much for writing.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! I wanted to write more, but then ran out of time.

     I think I knew it was valance, but writing at 3am will mess with your mind. Thanks for pointing it out! 

Title: Unexpected Gifts 13 Mar 2020 7:07 am
Reviewer: Dezra (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story, wish it was longer. It's a good set up for a longer story.
Title: Unexpected Gifts 04 Feb 2020 9:09 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this and, dare I say it, I’d love to read more.
Title: Unexpected Gifts 08 Jan 2020 3:33 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, this was sweet! I really liked how clever Snape responded, so acerbic. I loved it! Fantastic portrayal of character!

    For example, lines like this:

    Potter flinched. "Magic isn't real, sir."

    Severus arched an eyebrow. "I do believe you were a cat when you arrived."

    Muah ha! Love ya Snape. We need more versions like this. It's like the character has come alive. I could see Snape and Harry getting along splendidly. You should consider doing sequels.

    I was a little confused when I first read it - I did not pick up that this was preHogwarts at first and that Harry was eight or nine. If you ever decide to go back and edit I think that could be clearer.

    I really liked how the beginning and end repeated themselves. Lovely story to read. I enjoyed it. Thank you for writing and posting your mess!

    Just FYI, I edited your formatting for you so that it is easier to read. :)
Title: Unexpected Gifts 05 Jan 2020 4:16 am
Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) [Report This]
    This was cute. Like the black cat idea. Good job!
Title: Unexpected Gifts 02 Jan 2020 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it thank you for posting. I’d have loved to have had a little more of Cat Harry but never mind it was a great story and very well written, thank you

    Author's Response: I wanted to write more cat!Harry, but I ran out of time so had to rush. :( the holidays and life made it difficult to find time. 
Title: Unexpected Gifts 31 Dec 2019 8:00 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    liked the idea that Harry accidently turned himself into a cat. That would have driven the Dursleys crazy. Naturally since the only magical person Petunia knew was Snape, she dumped him off there. This would make an interesting longer story.
Title: Unexpected Gifts 28 Dec 2019 10:32 pm
Reviewer: Lemon Curd (Signed) [Report This]
    Cat!Harry is cute!

    And Petunia is "charming" as ever.

    The only thing I didn't like was Snape's misogynist insults. I know he's not likely to be better behaved than Molly Weasley, but ... I don't know, it makes me a bit uncomfortable.
Title: Unexpected Gifts 28 Dec 2019 11:14 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story. Especially liked the description of cat-Harry.

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