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Title: Chapter 1: girl 01 Jun 2021 2:33 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my merlin that chapter was incredible!!!!!!!!

    Woah!

    First, I love that the girl has some a longing to know her mother. So appropriate with the change of her gender to more yearn for her mother.

    This is an amazing first chapter. I love, love, love your Dumbledore and Snape. Fantastic voices, and emotions, and interaction.

    Dumbledore's voice like thunder? Fantastic analogy. Very in character, powerful after being so gentle.

    I love how Snape wanted to set the Muggle homes on fire. I can tell he's a spitcracker. Love it.

    And then his anger and shock and memories and thoughts when he was Lily's child and the writing on the wall... WOW. I would not be surprised if he actually does burn the house down.

    I loved hearing what Lily would of done too, the history. Fantastic!
Title: Chapter 1: girl 11 May 2020 9:20 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you very much a very interesting start to the story
Title: Chapter 1: girl 25 Apr 2020 9:38 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful start.looking forward to more.
Title: Chapter 1: girl 25 Apr 2020 4:16 am
Reviewer: Stuff and Nonsense (Signed) [Report This]
    YOU'RE BACK! I saw the title and was like, wait a minute...checked the username, didn't recognize it, checked the profile...boom, there it was! I'm so happy you're back :) Of course I'm interested to see where this goes. I liked the way this chapter read...I got this sense of things just being disjointed, which makes sense. Poor Ariel doesn't have anything to keep her grounded. I wonder if she'll have psychological issues that take prominence in the story? And her hair...Petunia is such a b*&$#. Can't wait for the next update! Hope you're well!
Title: Chapter 1: girl 25 Apr 2020 3:43 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start. I can’t help thinking of the Little Mermaid if her name is Ariel.

    Author's Response: Ironically, I actually hate the Little Mermaid LOL. The movie plot always annoyed me for some reason.

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