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Reviews For Aim & Ignite
Woah! First, I love that the girl has some a longing to know her mother. So appropriate with the change of her gender to more yearn for her mother. This is an amazing first chapter. I love, love, love your Dumbledore and Snape. Fantastic voices, and emotions, and interaction. Dumbledore's voice like thunder? Fantastic analogy. Very in character, powerful after being so gentle. I love how Snape wanted to set the Muggle homes on fire. I can tell he's a spitcracker. Love it. And then his anger and shock and memories and thoughts when he was Lily's child and the writing on the wall... WOW. I would not be surprised if he actually does burn the house down. I loved hearing what Lily would of done too, the history. Fantastic!
Author's Response: Ironically, I actually hate the Little Mermaid LOL. The movie plot always annoyed me for some reason. |
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