| Title: Chapter 10: the veil opens
| 25 Dec 2020 11:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Gar (Signed)
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This is wonderful and captivating. I could not stop once I began reading. I really love emotionally destructive Severus so much. I cannot even begin 5o describe how deeply your writing has made me feel throughout reading this.
I hope you are well. I also hope you plan to continue this wonderful work. But even if you don’t, thank you for writing and sharing this amazing piece. Definitely one of the better fics I have read recently.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a thoughtful review! I do plan on continuing, it's just so hard to find time to write these days!! Emotionally destructive Snape is SO fun to write, but it's even more fun to make him FEEL things, mwahaha!
| Title: Chapter 10: the veil opens
| 30 Sep 2020 4:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating. I loved the scene in the office, it reminded me of book 5 but Severus was way more destructive, I wonder how many others have tried to destroy the office?
The scene with the doe was lovely, I wonder how long it will take Ariel to connect the two events. Looking forward to the next instalment, please don’t stress yourself too much and stay safe at school
OH WOW!! First off, I hope all is well in school right now, it really is a scary time for teachers and students. I wish you all the best in teaching during these hard times.
This chapter was amazing! Leading up to it I was unsure of how you were going to address the fact about what voldy would do if he knew about the relationship. I think a lot of stories leave that out, and keep it as a huge plot hole. Since he can’t publicly be her father and a spy for Dumbledore at the same time. I cannot wait for more of this story! I hope you write one for every year of hogwarts!!
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