| Title: Chapter 18: the kids aren't alright
| 28 Jul 2021 9:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating, the pace is getting hotter in the story. Interesting that Severus sees that Draco is fixated on Ariel, I’d love to see the Malfoys reaction to that! I hope Hermione and Ariel get back to their previous relationship, it was so supportive for both of them.
| Title: Chapter 18: the kids aren't alright
| 24 Jul 2021 8:05 pm
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| Reviewer: raidyn (Signed)
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Absolutely loved this chapter! Keep up the good work, this fic is everything to me lol.
| Title: Chapter 18: the kids aren't alright
| 24 Jul 2021 5:18 am
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| Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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I found Snape stalking them amusing. As a parent, I totally get his need to do this. Draco and Ariel’s bickering was totally in character.
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