| Title: Chapter 20: child of wonder
| 10 Nov 2021 9:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great to have an update and a wonderful one at that. Great tension and writing and I loved it that Ron and Hermione were with her.
great chapter!! glad that ariel has the stone...
Ugh, this chapter was worth the wait! I really hope this marks the turning point for Ariel and Snape's relationship. I think the scene in Dumbledore's office really helped put things into perspective for Snape-Ariel needs to have a choice in all of this. Snape thought he was protecting her by keeping his distance, and maybe he really did think that, but he was also protecting himself. We all know our boy isn't the best at dealing with his feelings, lol. I also really like your portrayal of The Trio's friendship, in particular the one between the girls. That bracelet is awesome, btw. I can't wait to see where you take this story next. I hope things are going better for you, friend. Sending good vibes your way!
| Title: Chapter 20: child of wonder
| 07 Nov 2021 2:19 pm
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| Reviewer: raidyn (Signed)
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Snape absolutely panicking with worry will forever be one of my fav things. Yes... you care, babe. Protective Dad Snape my beloved always. Amazing chapter as usual
| Title: Chapter 20: child of wonder
| 07 Nov 2021 2:18 pm
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| Reviewer: raidyn (Signed)
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(Also, can we appreciate how Snape literally headshotted Quirrell with his boot, after he ALREADY blasted him, bc Dont You Dare Touch My Daughter. urgh music to my ears.)
| Title: Chapter 20: child of wonder
| 07 Nov 2021 2:10 pm
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| Reviewer: raidyn (Signed)
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So happy that youre feeling better, and extremely glad that this amazing fic continues. Been checking daily for updates lol, this is amazing. Keep up the good work , I cant wait to read more !!
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