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Title: Chapter 17: shadow of the threat 14 Jul 2021 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter thank you. Ariel Is often so like Severus that it is uncanny, and the lovely thing is that they seem unaware of it. Thank you for updating and have a lovely summer.
Title: Chapter 16: the rising deep 11 Jun 2021 2:36 am
Reviewer: roastedpepper (Signed) [Report This]
    Another chapter! Yay! I couldn't be more excited. Thanks so much for continuing this amazing story. It's my favorite at the moment, and I've probably reread it 3-4 times already. I love your characterization and how well you mix Snape's and Ariel's perspectives. It's just so well written. Cannot wait for the next installment. Poor Ariel, poor thing is losing it, understandably. Is the "darkness" aka Voldie, somehow connecting with the horcrux to bring about this anger and lack of control? Eep.
Title: Chapter 13: unchartered 03 Jun 2021 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    great job on the conv between severus & ariel!! overall great story!
Title: Chapter 16: the rising deep 03 Jun 2021 2:00 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for updating! I’m pleased I’m not wrong about Draco I find their interactions very interesting as it is so much more personal than in the books. I understand about Hermione being worried about Severus but I hope they make up soon, she is too good a friend for Arielle to loose.
Title: Chapter 2: letters from someone 01 Jun 2021 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! What a treat!!!

    "Angry-Man?" Hahaha I love Ariel's first nickname for Snape.

    Snippy is even better hahahaha!!!

    I loved the casual use of the magic of emotions, having things vibrate, or float. Snape losing control like that was fun. Ariel is probably the only thing he really cares about. I'm not surprised he went ballistic. I'm glad Dumbledore apparated Snape away before he could accidentally hurt Ariel.

    I find it hilarious that Dumbledore took Snape upstairs to "gather his thoughts" and cool off. And then all the booms and thuds. XD LOL "Redecorating." I thought it was funny when Dumbledore suggested he see if Petunia's kitchen needed attention too.

    Poor Ariel thinking she's crazy though before they explained everything. And having an almost panic attack at going to Hogwarts and not having enough money. I love that Snape took her and reassured her in his own no-nonsense way.

    I admit this chapter was really fun to watch.

    There were a couple of tiny typos and such:

    Ariel couldn’t if he’d gone because he was still furious for being locked in Aunt Petunia’s room, or because he’d felt Dumbeldore too.
    WORD MISSING? Tell?

    The attic door slowly creaked upon
    OPEN

    the lock fell off with a snap, and Ariel was starting
    STARING

    Author's Response: Adjfdsfksjdf thank you so much! Chapter 2 was one of my FAVORITES to write because of Snape being so over the top, with Dumbledore being his usual charismatic self while putting out a fire, and Ariel being confused as HELL.
Title: Chapter 1: girl 01 Jun 2021 2:33 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my merlin that chapter was incredible!!!!!!!!

    Woah!

    First, I love that the girl has some a longing to know her mother. So appropriate with the change of her gender to more yearn for her mother.

    This is an amazing first chapter. I love, love, love your Dumbledore and Snape. Fantastic voices, and emotions, and interaction.

    Dumbledore's voice like thunder? Fantastic analogy. Very in character, powerful after being so gentle.

    I love how Snape wanted to set the Muggle homes on fire. I can tell he's a spitcracker. Love it.

    And then his anger and shock and memories and thoughts when he was Lily's child and the writing on the wall... WOW. I would not be surprised if he actually does burn the house down.

    I loved hearing what Lily would of done too, the history. Fantastic!
Title: Chapter 15: these ties that bind 06 May 2021 8:35 pm
Reviewer: Sovietuniongirl87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Been thinking about this story all day! Can‘t wait for the next update!!
Title: Chapter 15: these ties that bind 06 May 2021 8:35 pm
Reviewer: Sovietuniongirl87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Been thinking about this story all day! Can‘t wait for the next update!!
Title: Chapter 12: wait for it 24 Feb 2021 5:29 am
Reviewer: Cas245 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an amazing story, I hadn't read fanfiction in ages and finally browsed this site again. I'm so glad I found this, you have an amazing way of writing and I can't stop thinking about the great relationship between the characters.
Title: Chapter 15: these ties that bind 21 Feb 2021 2:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for updating. I think this is a wonderful chapter, both with content and with the extremes of emotion. Severus has had to have a look at his actions and how he is dealing with Ariel. I’m not sure but it almost seems as if Draco is desperate for friendship with Ariel and because he doesn’t know how to get this he is trying for any reaction. I’m probably completely wrong but never mind. I do hope you continue this story when you can I’m really enjoying it.

    Author's Response: You're actually the first person I've seen to touch on that -- Draco wanting Ariel's attention will come into play next chapter (there's a reason there hasn't been much of him up until lately). I'm really excited to see that someone picked up on that LOL. Thank you for the review!! <3

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