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Reviews For Birthday Surprise
Title: Part Two: Severus 24 Jul 2022 12:05 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed reading this story from both Harry and Snape’s perspectives. That felt really well done. I hope there will be more to read when you have a chance, as it’s a great story!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! :) I'm so glad that you are enjoying my stories. 

    I am working on the next chapter to True Heart, so I'm hoping to update soon. :) 

     

Title: Part One: Harry 23 Jul 2022 11:46 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story! I’m so glad there’s a second chapter ahead. Thanks so much.
Title: Part Two: Severus 16 Jun 2020 9:41 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely to get Severus’s point of view thank you

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! :) 

    I guess I lied last time. I'm HOPING the next chaper will be the last. LOL! :) 

Title: Part Two: Severus 10 Jun 2020 11:41 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow what an ending! Loved the chapter thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'm hoping the next part will be the last chapter. :) 
Title: Part Two: Severus 10 Jun 2020 2:45 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that you did the chapter from Snape's point of view. I also like that Severus is married. With everything on his shoulders, he needs the support.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm so happy that you enjoyed both chapters. I'm hoping to have (hopfully) the last part soon. :) 
Title: Part One: Harry 10 Jun 2020 2:38 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was the perfect gift for Harry and who better than Snape to provide the information about Lily.
Title: Part One: Harry 09 Jun 2020 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter and story, the card was so beautiful

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm glad that you liked the card. :) 
Title: Part Two: Severus 08 Jun 2020 5:30 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I do like that Snape is in a relationship with a canon character who is a teacher. It makes sense, and was done in such a way as to only add to the story, and not distract from it.

    But this chapter ended in the same cliff hanger as the last one! Oh, that is just mean. But I did like reading from Snape's POV. He seems a lot softer, thoughtful, and loving. I'm enjoying this version of him so far.

    Well done on a second chapter! I wonder just how close Snape will be able to get to Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. 

    Honestly, at first, I was only thinking that it would be two parts, but I thought I would give Severus' version a go since he is a little out of character. If all goes right, the next part will be after the cliffhangers that were in the first and second. 

     

    Thank you, again! :)  

Title: Part One: Harry 08 Jun 2020 5:23 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Muah hahaha! I LoVE it so far. The ending of this chapter was a fantastic cliff hanger, but I am so glad there is a second chapter to read already!

    Good writing. I like your Harry and your Severus. Good pace and descriptions.
Title: Part One: Harry 05 Jun 2020 6:41 am
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet. I would definitely be interested in reading more of this.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :) 

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