Just a note that your story is so compelling that it’s been on my mind even after finishing all the posted chapters. In this chapter, I love how Severus isn’t mad at Harry. He acts like a true parent in understanding what Harry would do if given the opportunity, and then takes responsibility for not having ensured that Harry truly had no opportunities to pursue a dangerous path. Your story is a great blend of action, nail biting danger, and the development of relationships. I’m really enjoying it, and look forward to seeing what’s ahead (especially for Harry)!
Oh my goodness, the plot thickens to new heights! This was so good. I love your unique spin on canon. And, of course, your wonderfully long and rich chapters. This is a compelling story, and I’m looking forward to seeing how this all plays out! Thanks so much.
Wow, another epic chapter. I loved Severus’s foray into Harry’s past, and the resultant talk that was handled so well. The end with Greyback was just as chilling as anticipated. Thanks for your wonderful story.
What a wonderfully long chapter. I’m really enjoying all the plot threads.
This was a great chapter. There is an interesting tension here between the open-mindedness of the wizarding world with regards to gender identity, and the more conservative bent of the pure-blooded population. I hope that Sammy comes to no harm.
It’s helpful that McGonagall keeps tabs on everyone. The dialogue between Harry and Snape on certain topics was funny.
Oh no! Don’t they know not to imbibe anything of unknown provenance! Dumbledore is so cold and manipulative. It gives me the shivers.
This was another thrilling chapter. Fenrir is smarter than he looks. Thanks for your wonderful story so far.
This was a brilliant chapter. It totally lived up to your wonderful story.
I love all of the interesting side projects that the students are doing. I love the progress that Harry made in this chapter.
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