I love that the conversational rapport that Harry and Snape are developing. I hope that Harry builds up the courage to reveal more to Snape.
I love that Ron’s chess prowess is being given it’s just dues here. I hope that Harry is more careful.
Go Ginny! Thanks for another great chapter.
Thanks for these amazingly long and productive chapters! Young teenagers can be so awful towards each other. I like Harry and Hermione’s ideas…
The werewolf aspect adds a whole dimension of thrills to this story! I hope that Harry can keep escaping from Greyback’s clutches.
That was another wonderful chapter. Thank you.
Wow, this was a nail-biting chapter. Thanks for the thrilling ride, though my heart was rent at the thought of that old woman.
What an eventful start to your story! It was very enjoyable.
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| 14 Mar 2022 8:11 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating and a lovely long chapter. I loved how they reacted to the father and son talk. They stayed in character and didn’t become mawkish, well done.
These chapters are always wonderfully long so there's always a lot to talk about. I love it!
I'm so glad that Harry had that talk with Ron and later when him and Severus talked about Harry living with him. This is a big step towards him realizing that people really love him.
As for the werewolves, as soon as that story started I knew Greyback was gonna trick that poor guy into killing someone. I feel bad for the guy but it's also a great show of how Greyback targets people who are vulnerable. It's one thing to read about Remus saying it, but another thing to read it happening.
Anyway, great chapter as usual!
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